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love...

So I walked
Trudged rather, tired that I was
Towards the mirage that you created
Self said no, heart said go
And so I walked…


I travelled through days, weeks and months
Wounded feet and bruised heart
Faintly hoping the mirage would be you
Largely knowing it was just myth and hue
And so I walked…


I give in I give up
Destiny pulls me down, heart pull me up
Tattered to extreme, it still hopes
That mirage would be you and not just hues
And so I walk…





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  1. Mani23 July 2011 at 19:56

    I don't know what to say !!! *Shocked* would be more appropriate. I thought you were kind of sensible with lots of spirit and sense of humor...:P (now decipher what I said)

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  2. Noyon Jyoti Parasara23 July 2011 at 20:23

    err... this is a tough one. you seem i could project lot of things... be none! :P

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  3. Mani23 July 2011 at 21:50

    well actually I am totally clueless about poetry and poets for me are altogether from a different planet and I simply couldn't fit you in that alien planet earlier :P, but now on retrospection, the cancerian that you are, (I hope I am right) it shouldn't be a surprise. As for the poetry itself, I certainly am not qualified to comment on that, but yeah I liked your fiction much better than this. :)

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  4. Noyon Jyoti Parasara24 July 2011 at 01:17

    thank for that :)
    and yes i am a cancerian. i dunno from which planet though

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  5. Mr. Pramathesh24 July 2011 at 13:05

    If I were a girl who was ready to propose you, I would have changed my mind after seeing this.

    That is too intellectual.

    #backhandcompliment

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  6. Noyon Jyoti Parasara24 July 2011 at 16:36

    PB... after seeing this comment, i would have definitely not accepted the proposal :P

    That's too intellectual

    ;)

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  7. Sunshine..dreams.24 July 2011 at 19:29

    So have you written it from a girl's point of view, kya? *notices the picture next to the poetry and wonders* :P
    On a more serious note: *runs to grab a dictionary*, I will comment again after I decipher the meaning of Mirage. :P

    Lol lol okay, Seriously. I never knew, you would attempt something like this. Love it. =] Pleasantly surprised.

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  8. Noyon Jyoti Parasara24 July 2011 at 19:31

    sahai :( itni kharab thi kya?
    neither did i know i would attempt something like this... i am surprised too, dunno but id pleasantly!

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  9. Sunshine..dreams.24 July 2011 at 19:33

    I said lol lol twice > meaning > I was joking about what I said before the last line. :/

    Read between the lines Noyon, dammit. :P

    Loved it actually. Know what you going through. ;)

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  10. Noyon Jyoti Parasara24 July 2011 at 20:19

    hahahahah :D
    yeah i got that ;)

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  11. Niharika28 July 2011 at 14:41

    Good stuff Noyon!

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  12. Noyon Jyoti Parasara28 July 2011 at 19:25

    Thanks Niharika :)

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  13. Anonymous29 July 2011 at 00:56

    I loved it! was hoping for something to start and the poem ends abruptly.. and so ends a beautiful read. Short and crisp!!

    -rajashree

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  14. Noyon Jyoti Parasara29 July 2011 at 11:04

    sorry for letting you down Rajashree... life is such, abrupt and without conclusions :)

    thank you so much for the kind words

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