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So I walked
Trudged rather, tired that I was
Towards the mirage that you created
Self said no, heart said go
And so I walked…
I travelled through days, weeks and months
Wounded feet and bruised heart
Faintly hoping the mirage would be you
Largely knowing it was just myth and hue
And so I walked…
I give in I give up
Destiny pulls me down, heart pull me up
Tattered to extreme, it still hopes
That mirage would be you and not just hues
And so I walk…
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14 comments: on "Mirage"
I don't know what to say !!! *Shocked* would be more appropriate. I thought you were kind of sensible with lots of spirit and sense of humor...:P (now decipher what I said)
err... this is a tough one. you seem i could project lot of things... be none! :P
well actually I am totally clueless about poetry and poets for me are altogether from a different planet and I simply couldn't fit you in that alien planet earlier :P, but now on retrospection, the cancerian that you are, (I hope I am right) it shouldn't be a surprise. As for the poetry itself, I certainly am not qualified to comment on that, but yeah I liked your fiction much better than this. :)
thank for that :)
and yes i am a cancerian. i dunno from which planet though
If I were a girl who was ready to propose you, I would have changed my mind after seeing this.
That is too intellectual.
#backhandcompliment
PB... after seeing this comment, i would have definitely not accepted the proposal :P
That's too intellectual
;)
So have you written it from a girl's point of view, kya? *notices the picture next to the poetry and wonders* :P
On a more serious note: *runs to grab a dictionary*, I will comment again after I decipher the meaning of Mirage. :P
Lol lol okay, Seriously. I never knew, you would attempt something like this. Love it. =] Pleasantly surprised.
sahai :( itni kharab thi kya?
neither did i know i would attempt something like this... i am surprised too, dunno but id pleasantly!
I said lol lol twice > meaning > I was joking about what I said before the last line. :/
Read between the lines Noyon, dammit. :P
Loved it actually. Know what you going through. ;)
hahahahah :D
yeah i got that ;)
Good stuff Noyon!
Thanks Niharika :)
I loved it! was hoping for something to start and the poem ends abruptly.. and so ends a beautiful read. Short and crisp!!
-rajashree
sorry for letting you down Rajashree... life is such, abrupt and without conclusions :)
thank you so much for the kind words
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